Of Something Great

Much like the value of sand

            Of an hour glass

            Is in the purpose of each grain

Such are we

We are the shore

            Of something great    

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

WOW, such a wonderful write, "like sand through an hour glass"
Amazing, love metaphor

[Brad Dehler]

thank you so much. I really like your encouragement

[poetgurl]

This is wonderful, I really enjoyed this write, i like metaphors

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you! What did you like most about it?

[Ana B.]

There is a gentle greatness in simplicity, and even the harshest cliffs turn into soft grains of sand, just give it time. At least, that is what your lines inspired :) Love it

[Brad Dehler]

That means a lot to me- to have led to inspiration. Thank you!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Wow this is a strong metaphor
United we are great on the beach on the brink of
Thanks 🙏

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for this Julie! Very encouraging. Thank you