Holes

Everyone

    Has holes in their thinking

Evermore in their speaking

Our dubious task is

    To not fall inside

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Seems that each day, perhaps each season or term, presents data relevant from the past. That in turn leave those 'holes' for yet to be decisive completion. Research covers a multitude of factors as you surely know. For many, holes are an essential.. we need dig in order to discover more but with care - else there could be a landslide!

[Brad Dehler]

Quite right! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!...

[Curly Grace]

A small poem with a wide echo. We all carry these openings in thought and speech, and your lines name them with such gentle clarity. I love the honesty here.

[Brad Dehler]

Much appreciated, thank you so much Sarah. You have such an eloquent response!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha .. i love this as one trips over one's tongue to many times .. or fits a foot in there ... i see humor in this one and like it! i also appreciate the brevity ..
E.

[Brad Dehler]

To the point, yes. Even if the point is through the mouth or to the trouser. lol

[Betty Hermelee]

a complex view of speaking and thinking....damned if you do, damned if you don't.... do no go too deep inside...tread lightly....or you might find yourself in the hole....which isn't bad because you might actually learn something new....so holes aren't necessarily a bad thing....for either.
well done
warmly,
B

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for the compliment Betty. Complete view is quite nice to hear. I also like your in-depth analysis of those holes we find ourselves in...

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome Brad🌷
Warmly
B

[Chere]

Love this double edge sword of meaning...A very nice flow of words

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Chere!

[Desert Knave]

A thinking piece. I really like it (as my thinking is quite porous). ~Jim

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you. You are a humble person, such a good quality. Thank you Jim

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you. You are a humble person, such a good quality. Thank you Jim

[carl]

so very true, we can all relate I think. -carl

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Carl. It is important for my work to be as relatable as possible. I know some of it is daring and challenging but I would contend never pretentious. It flows out and I try to capture it faithfully to its nature

[carl]

I can appreciate that - something I struggle with is over thinking and rewriting once a idea occurs to me. I think that adds to the possibility of affectation. ( see, I just went and looked up that word rather than use pretentious. ) I think partially it comes from a desire to be not showy but exact. anyway - enjoyed your work very much. -carl

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you. That is an interesting word, thanks for looking it up for both of us. Affectation

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love this engage the brain before you speak or we fall in what we regret. Lol thank you for sharing

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you!

[Masked writer]

Fabulous first read, very relatable..Thankyou

M.w

[Brad Dehler]

I appreciate your vote on the matter :) Please tell me more about the second and third... :)

[Masked writer]

Indeed I will when the time is right

[Light and ashes]

How well spoken and well put.
As someone who has fallen many times over on the inside,
I can relate.

[Brad Dehler]

Keen observation. Thank you so much

[Light and ashes]

Welcome, very much.