As Classical Music

Page 69 from the book Syzygy (2020)

She is beautiful
As classical music
Surrounding me
With a lovely string piece

Reviews

[Mirror]

With a lovely string piece.......

Dear B, I imagine how music feels in the atmosphere! It fills up our space and makes our surrounding beautiful. Music is life and a universal language.

The "She" here is lucky to have you. You have liken her to life. Then to your readers, you use the universal language to explain her beauty

Then you projected your feelings with the space that is filled up with lovely string piece of her beauty. Stay in that atmosphere!

[Brad Dehler]

Mirror. Wow yes, you got it. You lived up to your name for certain! I appreciate you saying that. "Liken her to life" you are breaking the code. I will stay in that atmosphere as much a*s possible. Please, you do as well!

[Mirror]

Sure! You saw through me, I simply returned the favour!

And yes, I will stay in that atmosphere, sir!

[Brad Dehler]

Delightful smile over here

[Rosemarie]

Nice poem. It is a brief yet evocative piece that captures the elegance and emotional depth of classical music through the metaphor of a woman’s presence.

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, yes. You get it! Thank you for your reflection!

[Chris Shaw]

I am so into classical music currently. It moves me deeply, and some pieces transport me to ‘out of this world’. If she does that to you, you are one lucky guy. Lark Ascending, Vaughan Williams, works for me. Meaningful brevity Brad.

Chris

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Chris. I really appreciate your insight and inspiration. I will have to listen to your reference!

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

This is a wonderfully deep, yet short, concise poem.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for stopping by and reading! Cheers!

[Mysilentembrace]

I enjoy the "a lovely string piece". You end it in such a way that my mind is left to fill in the blanks and insert the string pieces I, myself, may know. Then the idea of it surrounding you gives it that atmosphere!

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, yes, yes! Surrounding in that atmosphere. I appreciate your keen take on this. Thank you :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I just re read this still luv it Brad

[Brad Dehler]

I appreciate so much that you returned to it AND still "luv it" !!!!!

[emmajoygreen]

Music is... ...the all about and all within, carried on the wind, in the auditorium. Carry it inside your head, it moves to the heart and.. is always and ever easily called. Think 'Rondrigo's Concierto'

Saucy rhyme compared to a source of utter enjoyment!

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you so much! I like how you describe the saucy rhyme :)
I appreciate your take on this, it inspires me. I'll have to check out "Rondrigo's Concierto"

[emmajoygreen]

Concierto de Aranjuez. II Adagio. Joaquín Rodrigo. Pablo Saínz Villegas/Carlos Kalmar/ORTVE.

[Brad Dehler]

I will have to check out this beautiful music

[emmajoygreen]

Please note that the surname is Rodrigo..

[Brad Dehler]

Dually noted, thank you much :)

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Brad Dehler,
Wow! Love it, simple
Recommend Haiku, and Senryu
It's 5-7-5 syllables,
I think you'd do great,
great poem
===Maynard

[Brad Dehler]

Thank yoU!

[1809 Black Plague December]

you are most welcome Brad Dehler, Manard

[MCS]

Conveys so much sentiment in so few words. Enjoyed!

[Brad Dehler]

I am glad you liked it :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i think enjoyment of classical music takes study and patience not demanded of our music of today .. my dirty ol' man thinks of the thin strings of sheer lingerie ... the key of G maybe :)))))) seriously tho ... the string sections of orchestration are so powerful, sweet and vigorous ... it's a lucky man whose life "She" is in .. best of the day to ya
E.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts E
You bring back the music all over again

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful short and sweet

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you!