As Classical Music

Page 69 from the book Syzygy (2020)

She is beautiful
As classical music
Surrounding me
With a lovely string piece

Reviews

[Mirror]

With a lovely string piece.......

Dear B, I imagine how music feels in the atmosphere! It fills up our space and makes our surrounding beautiful. Music is life and a universal language.

The "She" here is lucky to have you. You have liken her to life. Then to your readers, you use the universal language to explain her beauty

Then you projected your feelings with the space that is filled up with lovely string piece of her beauty. Stay in that atmosphere!

[Brad Dehler]

Mirror. Wow yes, you got it. You lived up to your name for certain! I appreciate you saying that. "Liken her to life" you are breaking the code. I will stay in that atmosphere as much a*s possible. Please, you do as well!

[Mirror]

Sure! You saw through me, I simply returned the favour!

And yes, I will stay in that atmosphere, sir!

[Brad Dehler]

Delightful smile over here

[Lisasview]

As an artist and a classical piano player I understand and really love this simple...yet complex poem of yours dear Brad.
Lisa, in Majorca

[Brad Dehler]

Yes! I am glad i hit the mark :)

[Lisasview]

As a poet I find it wonderful when my readers really "get it"

[Brad Dehler]

I know exactly what you mean!

[LadyNaida]

Beautiful piece. I use music as description in a lot of my poems. I love this!

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Lady Naida! I appreciate that

[LadyNaida]

You're welcome! As I read this piece I pictured a cello with it curves and the sound of the strings as they're being played.

[Brad Dehler]

yes. I enjoy your imagery :) Thank you for that

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. You paint this picture well.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you sir!

[Davidgeo]

Excellent comparison.

It's lovely when a person can uplift your entire existence with their presence. Their song permeates you and everything you think about looks and feels a little warmer. Love is very lovely music when it's played right, it uplifts everything it touches.

Hillary Hahn's violin talent is a good string simulation of this feeling.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Mr Davidgeo. Much appreciated. I dont believe i am familiar with that piece so I will definitely look that up and listen. Your take on "the presence" is so right

[Ken Simm.]

This is a love spell set to music. It would be interesting to hear what music people hear when reading this. I hear Tallis Fantasia by Ralph Vaughn Williams.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for this input Mr Ken! I will look that song up. Appreciate that reference!

[Betty Hermelee]

Stunning brevity poem, so few words, big emotions….. you bring classical music to life….quite romantic as well…..
Warmly B🌷

[Brad Dehler]

I appreciate you Betty, thank you. Yes... so lovely right, intermingling romance, infatuation, love....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this....so much description with that less is more theme...
and I love classical music as well.

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, thank you! You get it, feel it... hear it