excerpt from Adèle and GilbertA Poem by B. G. SawyerThe passage that follows is excerpted from Adèle and Gilbert, a long narrative poem set in Gothic France and written as an allegorical romance. Gilbert narrates, quoting Adèle and then himself.The
Green Cathedral
“I slowly turned then walked the pathway Leading to the brook Where, in our youth, our separate hearts, A single beat o’ertook.
“Two sets of billowed willows lined The banks above the stream And filtered from the sunlight Any harshness from its beams.
“The columns of the willows bore An intricate relief, Which God had crafted knowingly, Arranged of vine and leaf.
“The columns’ branches vaulted up, O’er reaching till they
clave, Enclosing stream and garden bed Within a verdant nave.
“I lingered in the garden
that We
cultured by the stream, Our
chancel where betwixt us, we We
partook our childhood dreams,
“And where we laughed and gently played The games that children play Before our dreams and innocence A savage world unmade.
“The densely knitted
swallow’s songs Retraced
each other’s flow, And
in the choir re-echoed hymns A
gentle God composed.
“I laid a rose’s petals on The grass in heart-like shape Then placed the verse thou penned for me Atop the silken crepe.
“The flowery altar’s sacred scent Suffused the brookside air With nectarous incense God had lit To sweeten votive prayer. “I prayed that God would ride with thee And vouchsafe thy return To recreate ourselves in me And seal our love extern’.
“I opened up my glazéd eyes To gaze upon thy verse And felt a rising passion that My heart had not rehearsed.
“In days to come, thy precious
verse The north wind swept away, But ere it did, upon my heart, Thy love its words inlaid.”
That said, she let her eyelids fall Upon her glittered eyes. Then slipped into a distant dream, Reciting whilst she cried.
So moved she was, her voice
changed cast, Assuming soulful tone To dress an altered cadence
more Relaxed and lilting grown. My frayed and tender
heartstrings her Recital gently nursed With rhapsody of yesteryear Whilst, touched, she quoth my
verse:
Gilbert’s Poem to His Adèle
“Thy most gracious and
beauteous being doth gleam A vision so pristine, so
pure That the poet within me
is summoned to sing, And the beast in my
heart is abjured.
“What a sonorous melody
sounds in thy breast, With tempo so faithful,
so calm That it renders the rage
from a warrior’s breast And provisions the want
with its balm.
“The empyrean spice of
thy soul doth exalt The places thy presence
perfumes. Its intoxicant lulls and
entices my heart To enrapture itself on
the fumes. “Thy deft, feathery
touch sets my spirit a’hum, Like gently stroked
strings on a lyre, And elicits a tone from
my heart that I’d never Heard played, for a want
of desire.
“Thy sweet innocence
freshens my palate with tastes That are delicate,
choice, sublime, And its nectarous
aftertaste lingers about With a savor that waxes
with time.
“The remembrance of
thee, like a mirror, reflects The image thine essence
ingrained. Its ethereal luster on
memory falls With the softness that
morning mists rain.”
Distant Vistas and Flashing Jade
She finished, but her
jadestone eyes Stayed shuttered whilst she
wept, And whilst they were, she
knelt in grace, Affixed upon the step.
But elsewhere did it seem her
mind Had wandered whilst she cried, Affixed to distant vistas she Beheld with inner eyes.
I
wondered what it was she saw That cast her in such grace, Provoking tears of sorrow, which, A’glisten, streaked her face.
Sweet memories and dear Adèle’s Appearance, swathed by grace, Combined to summon tears of joy That long had been displaced.
I sought to summon my Adèle From where it was she dwelled, That I might tend with
empathetic Words the tears that welled.
“Adèle,” I wept, “Adèle, Adèle, It’s God’s unfathomed art That’s led my erring footsteps to The lodestone of my heart. “What saved thee and what fetched thee forth Are not my heart’s concern. Rejoice in our reunion. Let Thy days of woe be spurned.”
The words I spoke scare
registered Before I saw her flinch When pressed she close her
eyelids Ere they, flashing jade,
unclenched.
And then her torso slightly
moved Most gently to and fro. The movement waxed
progressively Until she swayed in throes.
Whilst simple, pristine grace
transformed To passion, unrestrained, A terror struck my heart,
which wit And sense could scarce
restrain.
By increments, my dear Adèle Began to leash her throes, And ere my heart recovered,
once Again she knelt, composed.
Whatever conflict seized her
heart, She’d managed to resolve, And, resolute, she undertook The tasks her heart devolved.
A brackish crust began to form Where glistened tears had shone. Resolved and keenly focused, she Resumed in stoic tone:
“Again I beg forbearance, for To stop me would be cruel. So harken to my fable, love, Before thou play the fool.”
Her change of face had been so stark, So earnest, so abrupt That, well rebuked, ’twould be some time Before I’d interrupt.
I listened, then, with tongue a’leash To words my heart caressed But shuddered at, on hearing what It was Adèle
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