RAVE

i went to a rave once...

shiny silvery glass
the floor feels like air 
the energy 
our bodies 
creating mass 
.:. 
her eyes are entrancing 
her body the epitome 
she dances for herself 
she was dancing for me 
.:.
i journeyed 
though the valley of the gods 
and the revelation is 
angels are slaves 

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[Jordan]

Amazing.. well written and wonderful. Definitely makes you think.

[Wicahpi]

fascinating last line...
I've never been to a RAVE
but I'm guessing they are Wild!

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Last lines I like a lot. I like the flow of the poem. Took me on a wild trip with you.
Coyote