Religion

A new religion formed by you and I

Your softest touch

An invitation to a religion I never knew existed

My lips

Attached to your lips

Reciting scriptures which open doors to the heaven I feel whenever you are in my sight

 

Adolescents

Ignorant to the world which the masses belong to

The passion between you and I

Leads to the seven days of the creation of a world constructed perfectly by the curves of your smile.

Author's Note

Honest Reviews are appreciate

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

You are swaying away from the mainstream ideas and are trying to be fresh and embed a new look at love with the world. I like your daringness, for your poem may be short but it didn't took away your powerful message. You have talent, keep writing.

Good job :D

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Interesting and intriguing...love the line about adolescents. Nice ink.

[Myra]

Love and religion, didn't got though..?

[Triston Taylor]

I'd go for more of the mind drive of religion compared to love then the actual beliefs of it..you know what I'm saying? Love the idea though!!

[Willard Wells]

Interesting approach to love, but not a bad idea. Sharing love can never be wrong. But with all the religious fighting in the world, good luck. Thanks for sharing.