Cleansing Rain

... Just a thought that came to me ... it's super short.

I feel the rain within my soul.
It cleanses me and then,
I lift my face toward the sky,
And I can dance again.

Author's Note

I might add more later ... but for now it feels complete.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

i do not feel you need to add to this. Yes, it is short - but I think you have said so much here. There is the rain that comes in - at first, knocking you down a bit - yet as it continues it cleanses your soul - giving you the strength to find your feet once more - looking up at the sky, letting the rain hit your face - you dance. Nice.

[Amberlight]

. . . inspiring to me to write shorter poems. I tend to blabber on and on. Simple experience turned into a simple but powerful poem.

[Jade Leilani]

Very succinct, it doesn't appear that it needs more

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Super short with a super impact.
I like stanidng in the rain and it does feel cleansing.
Dancing in the rain .. a beautiful four lines.
I envy you all who can put so much meaning into 3 or 4 lines.

Chloe

[NyanMeow]

Simple but gets the point across so well! Times of pain, how we feel them, and then move on to something wonderful.

[An owl on the moon]

It really does feel complete.. There is the sense of pain... of that which clings to the heart and weighs one down.. and in that rain is a cleansing... a release.. a joy unspeakable... Beautiful to see dancing again!

[Greg Skura]

This is a great painting you have created here! We at times must cleanse our soul with tears from heaven. Well Done!

[Ladysue]

This is wonderful, beautiful. I would not change a thing...a lovely little gem...

[PaleWriter]

Great!

[just is]

I think this is wonderful the way it is. No need to add anything else. I really like your style. You are talented.

[hmm]

so much said here I like this, all that needs to be said is there. Well done!