the death of my honey

A honey-bee stings in its' defense

and then it dies.

How have you been feeling, my love?

Reviews

[Gianna Anaya]

I love the simplicity of this piece, it just resonates with a portion of my brain that I didn't know was a thing. An amazing use of words in small amount, with efficiency.

[J. B.]

Thank you so much and I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Feel free to check out some of my other pieces if you want to and let me know what you think. I'll look at some of your work as well :)

[Gianna Anaya]

I would really appreciate your review and look forward to reading more of your work!

[CherryEllie]

I really like it. It made me think and process this whole poem. I love the last line:

How have you been feeling, my love?

It made me think on it. I really liked it. Keep it up.

[GwenLark]

This was really well done :)

[Jes' Pi]

Simple, short, beautiful.

[LKBillips]

I laughed out loud to this, mainly because I took the last line as sarcasm. Either way I like the play on it.

[HeartBreakHotel]

Nice it's so simple yet so beautiful

[J. B.]

thank you so much :)

[emmajoy]

I laughed at the feigned humour of this; definitely has a sting in its tail!

[olla]

I like this one very much.. we do sometimes defend ourselves to death only to rise again as the wasp that can sting with impunity..

[J. B.]

thank you for reading!

[HeartBreakHotel]

Feel free to read my work