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A Poem by Dreaming Awake

bloody fist

holocaust

crimson delight

walk on indifferent

ignoring the sight

of human destroyed

from humanity's plight

birds don't sing sweetly

on this darkest of nights

© 2008 Dreaming Awake


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gcp
Dark indeed.
The rhyme scheme is interesting in that means the first line stands alone...

Posted 12 Years Ago

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 Added on November 3, 2008

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Dreaming Awake
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I love surrealism. I'm a photographer who likes to write for fun. I find the photographs of Man Ray to be especially intriguing. Hope you enjoy them too. Quotes are by Jean Cocteau A true poet doe.. more..