Tidal Wave

S        w       i      m        m      i       n      g. . .
If that's what you want to call this
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        o              b               n                            .
Floating slowly with each wave
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Falling away from the light
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Gasping for air that isn't there...

Reviews

[Alona Rivika]

This is very creative.

[Tay]

Thanks (:

[Alona Rivika]

:)

[Michael X]

I like this form, the flow & feeling are a consistent, feeling of suffocation.

[Tay]

Thanks (:

[Sami Khalil]

This one is really artistic like a tidal wave...:)

[Tay]

Thank you (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...