For the sake

Some Random Thoughts

Flowers bloom every day.

Day after day, come what may.
Mind looks for science, and purpose.
But they just bloom not to pose nor propose.

As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Clouds and wind roam around.
Making our hearts pound and sound.
Shaking the mighty Sun to dimmer.
Showers of heaven blowing the hot summer.
As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Thoughts spring up dressed in verses.
Moaning for meaning in meaningless stresses.
Soul of the thoughts sewn in the body of poem.

A work of emotion can send a beam not a theme.
As if the purpose of their existence is served.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Thoughts dressed in poetry....what a wonderful concept! Flowers do bloom no matter what happens around them.....they know their place in life and they know they must bloom....just as the poet knows he/she must write. I liked this one a lot, Bala. Lydi**

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you very much for the appreciation Lydia. This write us close to my heart. There may not be literary beauty in it, but I tried to pass on message that the existence and especially the flowers give us every day.. Thanks again for visiting.

[barleygirl]

The best part of your message is the way you describe how flowers bloom, but not from a sense of showing off or garnering attention, but instead just serving their purpose. That's something this world seems to be sorely lacking to me. If you look on social media, so many are trying to GET attention but fewer are giving any. I also very much like the way you use rhyme, both internal & sometimes at the ends of lines, a little unstructured & unexpected, but well done.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you for such an understanding review. I know I am a little un structured at places and a many a time at many places. I will definitely work on it. But I only fear, in that ornamentation, the soul cry would be lost.
But reviews like yours will definitely encourage me to put things well.
Thank you for commenting on those first lines because I always feel so, whenever I look at the bounties of nature, especially the flowers. Thanks again for your wonderful comments. :-)

[barleygirl]

Even tho I'm a regimented perfectionist most of the time, I very much enjoy unexpected unstructured, but well-crafted writing . . . I didn't mean that you need to be more structured. I love the looseness of the crafting. It's just intentional enuf, but not highly structured.

[Karmee]

I really enjoyed this write, flows nicely

[Bala Gorthi]

I am glad that you liked it.Thank you :-)

[Manu]

I really like rhyming scheme of this poem. A very meaningful poem on Existence.
A very good write :-)
I loved it

[Bala Gorthi]

I am glad you liked it. Thank you :-)