Broken Bricks

A saga of broken heart

She fondly cherished every inch of it
Treasured those sweet memories every bit
That love, fights, miseries and joys they lived
Precious pearls of memories their ocean shelved

A cyclone of treachery nourished by the selfish
Shattered the pieces of kindred bond to blemish
Jewels of bonds burgled by their motives so petty
Her heart suffered a mighty pain yelling for their pity

The helpless soul watching her kin in a war of greed
Grabbing alluring mundane vanities spoiling the creed
Gathering shattered pieces of heart, so ruthlessly shelled
The poor soul soulfully mourned the loss and her eyes welled

She can never get her sweet home back
It's kind of irremediable agonizing shock

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is an intense & compelling message becuz you write with image-packed word choices and action-packed verbs. I've read a billion end-of-love poems here & yours is very unique & original. I love the way you make this into a palpable whole, the complete story of what end-of-love can mean. It's so much more encompassing than having a broken heart. You've shown us here how a love failure can disrupt everything in a family's lives, with far-reaching difficult results. So well written! (((HUGS)))

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Margie, for visiting and appreciating. I am glad you have read this one. You rightly brought out the whole message in your review. May God give very strong hearts to those who go through such a phase.

[Sasha]

Beautiful poetry. I liked it.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Sasha, for visiting and reviewing.

[Michael S]

A heart rending tale of a broken heart who lost her home because of the greed of her kin that overtook love and placed it with selfishness. An insightful poem that shines the light on the problems that we face these days within the families. Great poem. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking and heart rending piece of work. Well done :-)

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Michael, for you visit and appreciation. I appreciate your continuous support that motivates me to write more and better. Keep visiting.

[Surya]

Truly a broken heart,
"She can never get her sweet home back
It's kind of irremediable agonizing shock", pain of her, described clearly.
Thank You Bala for sharing.

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you Surya for visiting and appreciated.