I should write something

I should write something today
from the ink of my tears
from my insecurities and worries
from those thousands of worldly fears.

My pen shall leave an impression
on every single page of my heart
so that I can lose me into myself
with this one lovely art.

I should incarnate my emotions
into the words hidden in my scars
and those voiceless songs behind my eyes
shall echo their purity like orions and stars.

And those little poetry pieces
that have been
fused into my synapses
as time has unfolded its hues
I shall drag them out from my numbness.

I should keep some of them for myself
Some of them I can put on walls
My fingers can grow more and write more
before this glared pen falls...

Reviews

[Geraldine]

I could somehow relate to this. :D I liked it! I liked everything. Well-penned.

[MOON]

Beautiful emotive write. Love this verse.I should incarnate my emotions
into the words hidden in my scars
and those voiceless songs behind my eyes
shall echo their purity like orions and stars.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx...

[Miss Alicia]

This is so creative. I really enjoyed reading this

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you very much

[Steven Cash]

I should review this cause it's amazing

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:) I should thank you then...!! :) :D

[Steven Cash]

loll :)

[Soul Fire]

|True art

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:) thanx

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome

[Soul Fire]

beautiful,lovely and emotional.

[Aditi Mahajan]

Yeah, Writing is a lovely art. This poem shows writers' emotions. Great!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya...and we all writers and poets are blessed to have this art...
Thanx for the review

[G!o]

Now this is something i can really feel when i read. This is an amazing work with great lines to match the melancholic ambiance of the poem. I love the whole poem in general, i can't start pointing out while line is my favorite. Nice work Balkaran.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I am glad you liked it....thank you so much

[Transience]

really touching.the poignancy of the poem is great.IMHO writing this one in free verse would have been better since the effort to rhyme seems to have a restraining effect on the beauty of this poem.great job still.love these lines-
And those little poetry pieces
that have been
fused into my synapses
as time has unfolded its hues
I shall drag them out from my numbness.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya i have got this habit of composing rhyming writes...i hav written very few poems free verse...but i am working on it...
thank you so much

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Ya i have got this habit of composing rhyming writes...i hav written very few poems in free verse style...but i am working on it...
thank you so much

[The Refined Poet]

this is an amazing, beautiful poem. So descriptive of the poetic process. The third stanza is my favorite. excellent...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you so much...