These theories of clouds

The beautiful clouds present many theories.....

I see those milky rainbows
swirling around in the blue heaven
they bind the Sun's throne with a burning zone
And the Moon's with a girdle of pearl
I see them bringing fresh showers
for the thirsting flowers,
They bring their bliss to farmlands
from the seas and the streams.
The dark one's
coil like a dragon's flanks
The droplets of whose shall
scatter freshness in the air
And the white one's
float around the mountains
like white daffodils
Over earth and ocean,with gentle motion
Lured by the love of the god
they move in the depths of the purple sea
Over the rills, and the crags,
and the hills, and the woods
Over the lakes and the plains,
Whatever we can dream,
under mountain or stream,
The Spirit we love to see,remains
And we all the while shall bask in Heaven's blue smile,
Whilst they dissolve our soul in the rain.

Author's Note

What do you think of the title?

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Over earth and ocean,with gentle motion
Lured by the love of the god
they move in the depths of the purple sea

vow nice imagination and great word use!!! great Piece!

[MOON]

Striking imagery clouds are heavenly to watch and mysterious too

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Absolutely... they are...thanks for the review moon

[quinfinn]

the title works well with the theme of the whole piece and the poem itself is very
well written and filled with beautiful imagery and some fascinating adjectives.
nicely done!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx...

[G!o]

This is definitely one of the best pieces you've ever written Balkaran i totally enjoyed this and i love how you thought outside the norm box. Wonderful.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you very much...i guess am getting better now

[G!o]

Dont even guess, i believe you're getting better.

[Geraldine]

Nicely written. :D Great observations. ^^

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx..

[frivolous treasures]

Absolutely lovely poem! Eloquently written with a bit of wistfulness... I need to spend more time watching the clouds! ^_^ The title is great, and portrays the message of the poem greatly. Awesome job. :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx for the review

[Marie]

You speak of g=clouds in a lovely way...milk and pearls they are...

I would title it "The Theory of Clouds)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx...

[Aditi Mahajan]

Clouds present amazing theories.....and your poem explains them!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

exactly :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

great title..I think it could do without the rhyming words..they come across as being a little forced..I LOVE to look at the clouds, when I was young i would lay for hours on my back just staring at their ever changing beauty

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I tend to go with rhymes....but m working out how to stick with the free verse..