The Sky has secrets of its own

The sky hides itself behind the walls of iis blue secrecy...

It stretches wide over our little world
perfectly poised,open and wide as plains
stretching to every void of our universe
But under that uncluttered blue hue
lies the secrets that we all seek

The red beauty that we glance upon
while the sun sets in the paradise,
presents itself with a bliss
only to drench our mind into skepticism
We lie awakened at the night
for the darkness that flourishes
in witching hours
with those tiny little glowing stars

Deep into the sky
We feel those nebulae,the star clusters
Hundreds of those ghostly glows
and subtle spatterings
folds our mind even more
sparking inner turmoil
fusing logics into our beliefs

The sky may look lethargic at a time
with that hollow silence of its own accord
it may look as a festive place at some other
with the rainbows,the clouds,the thunders,
the lightnings,the moon and the stars

But can we  somehow unravel
the uncharted secrets
that the sky carries
in every single chunk of its own...

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Nice write! You may consider just leaving "lethargic at times" instead of "The sky may look lethargic at a time". Good work!!!

[G!o]

The mystery unsolved but whatever lies behind that happy smile of the sky, i still love it. I love the choice of words and how you have designed this in a nice flow. Really written well...i applaud you

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanx mate...

[Divine Pen]

the mystery of sky can be solved :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

indeed

[Marie]

The sky is indeed a mystery, both day and night. The stars hold secrets; the sun is a mystery...will our universe collapse before we solve its puzzle...?

[Balkaran Sidhu]

well u might find it amusing but i hav a lot of interest in cosmo physics and stuff.....been reading stephen hawking....i hope ll solve d puzzle..

[Marie]

I don't know if the puzzle can be solved, but Stephen Hawking is the man to do it.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ya certainly he is......or who knows ....u never knw .....if i could just chance my mind!!!!!....

[quinfinn]

i have always adored the night sky beyond all else and you have captured it nicely herein...thank you for being a champion for night

[Balkaran Sidhu]

me the champ :) thanx

[quinfinn]

;)

[MOON]

Lovely write the sky mysterious and beautiful at the same time.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanx moon

[Dr. Wood ?]

wonderful poem..the sky holds many secrets..

[Steven Cash]

Very nice

ALIENS!!!!! (which do exist)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

:D