A Blank Note

Without you, those pages  are completely blank

those poems stand for nothing

they flicker in the past ruminations

As if a cloud of sorrow

ruling the silence of the sky.

Where I have written your name

Accused for too much tenderness

I feel it hard to pronounce your name

even after all those years of constancy

But this mystic fragrance keeps me alive.

Through your days of misery

It was my heart,that breathed 

to change the winds that ruined us

The sun melting our solidity

As a touch, through tender fields of sand.

 

Arched in undulating confessions,

proposals made in sweet everglades 

How sweet are the poems?

that bring us together again

in the reality of my virtual world.

You wouldn't dare to embrace my words

But put them beneath your pillow

Soak them in your occasional tears

Visualize them in immortality of my passion

I won't disappoint your silken ed heart

Here is a spoon of serendipity

Where our deepest solitude mixes

With our narrow attempts at love

To bleed over the secrets I penned for you

I might not give up those dying hopes.

 

Author's Note

Title suggestions please....i was not able to decide any appropriate title..so ironically I named it 'A blank note' :p :)

Reviews

[patricia]

Sometimes the voice you write in is so supernatural in a gorgeous way.
For me, words like this raise the quality of communication to the heights.
Every line you write is food for contemplation.
You are the master of atmosphere and emotion.
Always going just that little bit farther, leaving the reader one last inspiring thought.
Which I found in the words...I might not... on the last line of this outstanding work.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thanks trish

[chaotic katie]

I loved this piece, it flows flawlessly and the imagery is amazing. fantastic job

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thanks katie :)

[Alexa Tasch]

I actually liked the title! I thought this was a sweet and sad poem and beautifully written as always!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you alexa

[Alexa Tasch]

You're welcome!

[Alexander Rodgers]

''It was my heart,that breathed '' would seem like a fitting title. I love this, very well written my friend. Your words speak true, fantastic! Keep up the great work. My favorite lines are,
''You wouldn't dare to embrace my words
But put them beneath your pillow
Soak them in your occasional tears''

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you alex :)

[Blue Ivory]

If you can't come up with anything, go with "You"...
I love reading your work! You're really good with words.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

thank you so much :)

[gombeggar]

this is all vey forced lines

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you sir

[Dayran]

Every effort has a purpose and every wait a rhyme.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Thank you Dayran