I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ms claws]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man ... captures that awkwardness of "first love" perfectly says i! i am left wondering if he ever did make those "feelings" known .. lots of memories flashing before me of the times i did and the times i did not ... and absolutely the times i buckled up and took the plunge ... come what may :) a delightful read for me
E.

[ETERNITY]

This is a really beautiful and passionate love story.
Oh, man, it leaves the reader on a cliff wondering how it all turned out!
Great poem!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thanks so much for your review. I really appreciate it.

[Grace Lee]

This is very clear and everyone felt this at some point

[Blooming Flower]

I found this relatable. I'm always hesitant to confess any feelings I have and always try to push the emotions away. It's a wonderful piece!

[Şenay]

A passionate poem about unrequited love

[Yellow Submarine.]

Yes. It happened. It's life I guess. It's good to write when emotional I think.

[Şenay]

I think when you infuse your writing with emotions, you can create an emotional connection that resonates with your reader and leaves a lasting impact.

[Yellow Submarine.]

I agree. How nice that is too. I'm a readwe of novels no doubt.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

the poem from the first line expresses vulnerability. and the final line drives in the nail. being in love is to gamble, and many lose. but maybe i will win? that question lingers in all lovers, and while i wish it could work out for everyone, all is fair in love and war, and some are eventually left torn apart.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you Ern! I appreciate you're reading my stuff.

[Arundass TP]

Nicely written poem. Excellent writing 👍

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much. You're very kind.

[Rubi]

Franky i love it its absolutely beautiful

[Yellow Submarine.]

Awwwwwwww. Thank u!

[Rubi]

Alg hope to see more

[mou]

The repetition of 'I do wonder' syncs perfectly with the delicacy of a heart.
Sometimes this 'I do wonder' gains too much weight to bear. Nice poem, Franky
- mou

[Yellow Submarine.]

So nice of you. 🙂 Thank you

[mou]

You're welcome :)