I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ms claws]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[Gaia Octavia]

Ah, the hesitant unsurety of love. A rich well to draw from artistically, and this is a powerfully vulnerable piece. It reads like a whispered confession in the dark. Nicely done!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Awe!: thanks straight from my heart. What a wonderful review. I appreciate you!

[Lizzy B]

Rejection is powerful but grows us. We are all rejected in some way and forced to either push through or pivot. 🧘🏻‍♀️⬆️ ✨️ Always Go for it! That's what I say. Very Relatable piece 👌 👏

[Yellow Submarine.]

I agree! Thanks.

[Writergurl]

So very nicely written, I love the poetic feel of this write as well.
Awesome write

[Yellow Submarine.]

That's very kind. Especially since I'm more of a story writer.

[Writergurl]

the last story I wrote has a little over 1,000 pages. I don't write too many stories anymore.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Why stop? What was it about,

[Writergurl]

It was called "Jenny's Colt" A little girl who got a colt for her birthday and it got stolen from her about a month later. Everyone went searching for it, a couple years later the horse was found, it had got away from the person who stole it, she went through lengths to prove that it was once hers, I won her case. (Will this is the jest of it.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Is it posted here?

[Writergurl]

No, I lost it when I moved from Tennessee

[Yellow Submarine.]

Oh ok. That's too bad. I like a good read here.

[Writergurl]

I miss that story so bad, I have been trying to piece together what I remember from the story

[Yellow Submarine.]

Ok. I'd read it. 😀

[Shweta]

The charm's taken me over
For I could not think nor lure

Well put! The turmoil and confusion, charm and fantasy, love and fear all so evident in this yet to blossom love story..

[Yellow Submarine.]

You're even poetic in your reviews! How nice. Thank you my new friend.

[Starbaby]

Nothing ventured, nothing gained. You can only play your cards so close to your chest for so long before you have to declare your hand. Love is a crap shoot at best, but the payoff, if it comes, is sweet and rich. That moment of vulnerability, when we are perched on the precipice of love and acceptance or the despair and agony of rejection. We have all been there, and can all understand the feelings here.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you! This one didn't work out though. But it's a good thing it didn't as it turned out.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Love, such a little word but what are we without it?
Your poem is relatable to every reader. Bringing us to that very moment where we must declare our heart or suffer in silence.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you Cherry! Sorry im slow.

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

I read your poem and was moved by the raw emotion and vulnerability that you expressed. Your words capture the intensity of falling in love with someone and the confusion and uncertainty that can come with those feelings. I appreciated the way you used repetition to emphasize your wonderings and to create a sense of urgency in your words.
Your poem also touched on some important themes, such as the fear of rejection and the difficulty of being true to oneself in the face of uncertainty and risk. I felt a sense of empathy for the speaker in your poem, and I appreciated the way you explored these complex emotions with honesty and sensitivity.
Overall, I thought your poem was beautifully written and deeply felt. Your words capture the essence of what it means to be human and to experience the ups and downs of love and relationships. Thank you for sharing your work with the world, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future.

[Yellow Submarine.]

What a wonderful review! Thank you from deep in my heart for your honest and helpfil.thoughts and points. I appreciate you greatly.

[Lisasview]

quite difficult..
Crazy computer...sorry, had to continue here... So weird.
Anyway, definitely enjoyed the read!
Lisa, now in Spain

[Lisasview]

Quite relatable... being honest with ones feelings and trusting that the person you are pouring your heart out too is someone you can trust can be q

[Yellow Submarine.]

Wow. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. I appreciate it greatly.

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome...
lisa

[Yellow Submarine.]

I am very glad you took the time to read and reflect your thoughts. You are very encouraging. 😀

[Lisasview]

I truly believe that writers ~ poets need to encourage other writers ~ poets to work on their words..
Lisa

[Ioana Mihai]

Lovely poem!
Love is beautiful anyway…. Sweet and bitter like a dark chocolate… still a blessing to be able to love. As long as we live we shall love

[Yellow Submarine.]

What a wonderful comment. Thank you from my heart. ❤️‍🩹

[Ioana Mihai]

Welcome, from the heart as well
Your poem inspired my words, your creation keeps creating into the readers new emotions and metaphors ❤️

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are very kind. Thank you.my new friend.