I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ms claws]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[duff]

Heartache growing until the release. There's always a space for letting go. Nice job.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Hi Duff. I appreciate you taking the time and reviewing. sorry i didnt notice your review.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Franki, this is beautifully written! I loved the repeated lines! I believe a lot of people can relate to this poem!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Ah thank you! You are so kind. ☺

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[Yellow Submarine.]

I need the encouragement.... thanks again.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

It was really good!

[slfisher89]

Perfectly captures the anxiety, infatuation, and fear of rejection of a crush

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much! You are so kind.

[KAREN]

Heartfelt and written with emotion!

[Cori Kate]

This was such a lovely read and so full of feeling! Sometimes the wondering is more uncomfortable than the final answer.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you Cori. I wrote this while very much in love with a co worker. It didn't end well.

[lessa (kenzie)]

WOW!! Love the rhyme scheme, This is so good. but all the what if's that could be.
This is amazing, so well expressed and powerful as well

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you for your kind encouragement. That means a lot.

[Haley]

This is a great poem! Whenever you have a crush, or in love, all these "what-if's" run through our heads sometimes making it hard to think straight. With this line, "About me telling you what's in my heart, And how your reaction could tear me apart" is very powerful!

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are very kind. Nice to see you again.

[Kerra]

Sweet poem, just have to believe good things are coming..

[Tina]

Sweet poem, I'd say take a chance. Regret it not fun.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Well.....I did take the chance. This was a really life situation. But it didn't end the way I wanted. 😬

[Tina]

Sorry about that

[Suzanne Sonderleigh]

Lovely poem. I like the rhythm of the words. It’s easy to see you write with much emotion…straight from your heart in this poem. Great write!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much Suzanne.