I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ms claws]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[Unspoken poet]

Such a lovely write here, Love the rhyme scheme

[Ballpark Frank]

thank you dear. You are very kind. 😀

[SheIsMe]

I completely understand this one on so many levels. It's a tortured but blissful thing. One that you can't bear to lose. You expressed it well and the emotion in this piece is real.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much. This is actually something I wrote 15 yrs ago. I was very much in love, but it's a good thing that things didn't work out. She was not what I thought she was.

[Samuel Dickens]

What Margie said. Looking back at my own life, I have to ask myself whether a guy's intense desire for a woman is really a good thing or not. In this well-penned poem, it's obvious that someone has a really bad case of it. I want him to succeed, to be brought beside her with flowers, birds flittering and an angel choir. Sadly, I know that might not happen. Still, we will have hope.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you Sam. I am very pleased you took the time to read this. I wrote this about 15 years ago. I have changed much in that time in many ways.

Have a wonderful weekend.

[Seriana]

Lovely write. What caught me immediately was the font color. You don't see red much for that. It brought a presence of the speakers voice. I liked the short, rhymed lines.
Nicely done!

[Ballpark Frank]

You are kind... This means a lot since you are pretty talented. Thanks! I'm just learning.

[VJWild]

I can relate to this a thousand percent. Simple and to the point. Thoughts always racing and this says it all!

[Ballpark Frank]

You are so kind! Thank you dear.

[wordman]

we should n have to wonder,but we do,good write

[Ballpark Frank]

You are right. Thxnk for reading!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Frankie :-)

OHHHH the uncertainties of love, God help us all....lol.
My kind of poem!!! I love it from the start and the end, perfect!!!
Written from your heart, I felt it ;-)

But life always has beautiful surprises in the universe magical box, one just need to truly believe in that from the heart.
Superb!!!
Stay happy,
Sil

[Ballpark Frank]

Wow. That touched my heart. Thank you dear sweet lady....

[Silmara McGarry]

You are truly welcome!

[Ballpark Frank]

You are so much kinder than most here. Lol thx for that

[Silmara McGarry]

;-))))) Thank you!

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you,!! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Tina H.W.]

Wow Frankie, I haven't reviewed a poem or story on here for four years. I have no idea what made me choose you or this particular poem, but it's so weird that your words in this poem has really touched my heart and hits home exactly what it's feeling at this time. It's very relatable and beautifully written. Well done 😊

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you so much. That means the world to me. I rarely get reviewed to be honest unless I reviewed 4 or 5 writes of someone else's.

I've come and gone a few times here as well. Hugs to you.

[Tina H.W.]

You're welcome 😊 It really is such a heartfelt poem. Hugs to you too.

[Ballpark Frank]

You are very special to say so. I've been here off and on for 11 years. So I've come and gone too. thank you from my heart for your reading and reviewing this.

[Tina H.W.]

It's my pleasure. I didn't choose this beautiful poem, it chose me. 😊

[DIVYA]

One sided love or one that comes with encumbrances can be quite a weight to bear. Always subdued, always hushed, it almost always gets crushed under its own burden of guilt, of longings choked too long. Your words are very relatable and the angst is palpable throughout.

[Ballpark Frank]

Thank you! This situation wasa crazy and unwise one. Yikes!

[Kaylor Mason]

Wondering too much can drive you crazy. I love how you made the text red--it showed the urgency of the man's heart. I also like the honesty of it. Nice work.

[Ballpark Frank]

It was about a real situation. Thank you for reading!