I do wonder

Sometimes love comes amid many complications.

I do wonder......

About all these feelings I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... I don't want this to end badly Since I'm in love with you so madly I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile all the more Since I crave seeing you walk through any door I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Reviews

[Seriana]

Hum...I came upon this from an old review you id for me. I do wonder, now, it's been 4 years since you posted this. Has your wonder claimed an answer? I do wonder....

The red font is perfect. A dichotomy of love potential or bleeding nothing. Love it!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much! I actually wrote this is 2005. It was a mistake that I'm glad I didn't make. 🙂

[Ms claws]

Alrighty then! That kind of negates my advice: Just talk. Do not 'push' for anything more than friendship until you both "know"...and you will.

[NotUsinganymore]

I like the lingering of love the poem has. It gave a nice touch of sadness to it.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much!

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome! Please check out my poem too!

[Azifwecare]

I can relate to this. Oh and the internal torture. I was afraid if I said anything... One of those damned if you do/don't situations. Loved the poem my friend.

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are awesome for reading this and commenting. I liked writing this, but im not great at these writes. Lol

[Azifwecare]

It's important to say what you want to say or write it for that matter. Better than bottling it up inside. You don't have to be "great" I honestly think when people see it they will gravitate to it or not, and it's ok if they don't. Remember to write for you. Not to please the crowd.

[Unspoken poet]

Such a lovely write here, Love the rhyme scheme

[Yellow Submarine.]

thank you dear. You are very kind. 😀

[SheIsMe]

I completely understand this one on so many levels. It's a tortured but blissful thing. One that you can't bear to lose. You expressed it well and the emotion in this piece is real.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much. This is actually something I wrote 15 yrs ago. I was very much in love, but it's a good thing that things didn't work out. She was not what I thought she was.

[Samuel Dickens]

What Margie said. Looking back at my own life, I have to ask myself whether a guy's intense desire for a woman is really a good thing or not. In this well-penned poem, it's obvious that someone has a really bad case of it. I want him to succeed, to be brought beside her with flowers, birds flittering and an angel choir. Sadly, I know that might not happen. Still, we will have hope.

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you Sam. I am very pleased you took the time to read this. I wrote this about 15 years ago. I have changed much in that time in many ways.

Have a wonderful weekend.

[Seriana]

Lovely write. What caught me immediately was the font color. You don't see red much for that. It brought a presence of the speakers voice. I liked the short, rhymed lines.
Nicely done!

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are kind... This means a lot since you are pretty talented. Thanks! I'm just learning.

[VJWild]

I can relate to this a thousand percent. Simple and to the point. Thoughts always racing and this says it all!

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are so kind! Thank you dear.

[wordman]

we should n have to wonder,but we do,good write

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are right. Thxnk for reading!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Frankie :-)

OHHHH the uncertainties of love, God help us all....lol.
My kind of poem!!! I love it from the start and the end, perfect!!!
Written from your heart, I felt it ;-)

But life always has beautiful surprises in the universe magical box, one just need to truly believe in that from the heart.
Superb!!!
Stay happy,
Sil

[Yellow Submarine.]

Wow. That touched my heart. Thank you dear sweet lady....

[Silmara McGarry]

You are truly welcome!

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are so much kinder than most here. Lol thx for that

[Silmara McGarry]

;-))))) Thank you!

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you,!! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Tina H.W.]

Wow Frankie, I haven't reviewed a poem or story on here for four years. I have no idea what made me choose you or this particular poem, but it's so weird that your words in this poem has really touched my heart and hits home exactly what it's feeling at this time. It's very relatable and beautifully written. Well done 😊

[Yellow Submarine.]

Thank you so much. That means the world to me. I rarely get reviewed to be honest unless I reviewed 4 or 5 writes of someone else's.

I've come and gone a few times here as well. Hugs to you.

[Tina H.W.]

You're welcome 😊 It really is such a heartfelt poem. Hugs to you too.

[Yellow Submarine.]

You are very special to say so. I've been here off and on for 11 years. So I've come and gone too. thank you from my heart for your reading and reviewing this.

[Tina H.W.]

It's my pleasure. I didn't choose this beautiful poem, it chose me. 😊