Broken.
A Poem by
Roberta
Thought bubble.
Cracked heart.
Broken mind.
Left in parts.
Left behind.
Mind contorted.
Trust in pieces.
Hope has faded.
Love ceases.
Will disabled.
Happiness fails.
Sadness returns.
Anger prevails.
No love again.
Fault of my own.
Hurting like hell.
Forever alone.
© 2012 Roberta
Author's Note
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Reviews
Wow....Sad..Grreat job tho. I really enjoyed it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful and sad. Rhymes so well. Would sugggest that in the last verse you add a pronoun to the line "Fault of own." Either "Fault of your own" or Fault of my own.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful and sad. Rhymes so well. Would sugggest that in the last verse you add a pronoun to the line "Fault of own." Either "Fault of your own" or Fault of my own.
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Added on February 17, 2012
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Roberta Swindon, United Kingdom
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- 'Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are'
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