Productive

The glow of

That computer,

It's my guiding light.

Like the X on

A map

Or

A big red button,

That I really

Shouldn't push.

I should go away,

Do something more

Productive.

Reviews

[EMP]

i like this :) it's reallyt good, you've produced strong imagery in a really short piece and it's worked and it's impressive! you're quite the brilliant poet miss mars. (though i'm sure I've said that to you before)

[Ama May Cooper]

i like ths alot, funny and yet very meaningful a great piece of work

[Coyote Poetry]

Wisdom in your words. Computer steal our time and mind. I like the poem. Told a real story. A excellent poem.
Coyote