craziness

I keep holding on
to the only thread of life
as the faint ghosts flow
come and go out of sight
so I wonder
 have I lost my mind?


the world changed color
now it's all in grey
is this reality true?
is it only in my brain?
I keep wondering
 have I gone insane?


Regret knocks my thoughts door
rushes in, conquers me all
takes from my flesh the soul
leaves me with a rotten core.


an advice to you that read
keep holding on to your dreams
never let them from your heart flee
remember, it's you that makes them real!


we're all a little crazy inside
search thoroughly, I know you'll find
a small hidden part that is blind
hold on to it, cherish it with pride.

Author's Note

hehe don't know where that came from :P

Reviews

[DrD]

Message poetry is always interesting and is seductive in its appeal. You message comes across clearly and with force. I am a little doubtful of the structure of the stanzas 6-6-4-4-4 and don't know why but I'm sure you do. In all, I found it to be an enjoyable read.

[Salar Majak]

thanks , and i am not sure about theses XD

[LA Lorena]

maybe it came from the voices in your head ;)

you are right though, everyone feels a little crazy and misunderstood from time to time.

[Salar Majak]

hmmm maybe :P

[Phillitup]

keep holding on to your dreams
never let them from your heart flee
remember, it's you that makes them real!

This is so true...not only with dreams. Seeing is never believing. Actually, it's quite the opposite...

[Salar Majak]

yup you are right, thanks