an unanswered question

don't even havan idea where this came from

Oh fearless mountain!

ever so silently standing still.

Will to my heart one day,

your untold secrets spill?

Am i to enjoy the beautiful dream,

of flowing with river's water,that so gently streams,

and let my soul forever yell: ''free! I AM FREE!''?

Reviews

[Night]

...In Chinese tradition it is told of the fish that travels up the yellow river against the current...leaping up through the rapids, until it reaches The River Gate, where it continues up into the clouds transforming into a dragon...completing it's spiritual journey in life....free at last. Great write my friend.:)

[Salar Majak]

great story :), thanks alot, i'm glad you like the write

[Night]

...you're very welcome...:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

its a nice write

[Salar Majak]

thanks!!

[Cara]

i think it is nice in a sad way write

[Salar Majak]

yeah

[Salar Majak]

thanks sis

[DIVYA]

It come from your innate need to be free...like the free-flowing river! Beautiful Aurora, you have just inspired me! :)

[Salar Majak]

:D glad i did!!!! thanks

[Chidoriflower]

On a mountain, you feel the breath of fairies, well maybe on Mt.Shasta...you are free!!! Nice job, Sal. ^^

[Salar Majak]

thanks^^

[Annabelle Lee]

beautiful.

[Salar Majak]

thnak you

[LA Lorena]

very nice! We all yearn to be free of spirit!

[Salar Majak]

yup, we do, thnaks

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I hope you may be free as a mountain waterfall...very nice.

[Salar Majak]

hmmmm a mountain waterfall, how beautiful it looks to me :) thnaks

[Dr. Wood ?]

very nice.....you need to put the N in AND though on the last line

[Salar Majak]

oh thanks for spotting that!!!, i have a habbit of eating letters as my dad puts it :P

[Dr. Wood ?]

great phrase.....and a diet of letters can only improve your writing, is what I say...so EAT away

[Salar Majak]

XD lol i will!!!!

[Richard Man]

I love the phrase "the habit of eating letters"... I might write something about how you nibbled away at a piece of text and completely changed it's meaning.

[Frieda P]

To be one with nature, flow freely like a stream into the sea, sounds delightful. It's a lovely dream...

[Salar Majak]

thank you alot :) 'm glad you like it

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes thaz a nice way to put it

[Salar Majak]

:)