Mr. Thief, Mr. Thief

Hmm, song. :D

And if you ever look back

In a picture frame of me

That you still have

Think of all the mistakes

You made and now

Where would I be?

 

Crying over you in some pitiful state

Wishing that you were mine?

Hoping for you to come right back

Oh, isn't that a such a shameful crime?

 

Mr. Thief, Mr. Thief, you stole my heart

I wish I could get it back

But It won't be yours for so long now

I'm gonna steal it back

 

Thanks for the pain you

put me through

I'm stronger than you'll ever be now

And if you don't believe it

What you see

Then I guess you'll  have to figure out.

 

I won't cry over you in a pitiful state

Wishing that you were mine

I won't hope for you to come right back

Isn't that just a shameful crime?

 

Mr. Thief, Mr. Thief, I stole my heart

You wish you could have it back

But now it's mine and not so hurt

You won't steal it back

 

But Mr. Thief, Mr. Thief, I loved you so

Once upon a time.

Author's Note

I actually have all the chords planned out of this. I'm sure I'll have YouTube video of it soon as well. :)
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Reviews

[ATG]

Very good song lyrics. Sorta of catchy especially the stanzas starting with Mr. Thief, Mr. Thief. I'm sure it sounds good with music. Did you every post it on youtube? If so, care to share the link?

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I did not, I haven't had the chance. I need to get a computer of my own to do so. Which will hopefully be soon.

[ATG]

Well let us know when you do. I'm sure I'm not the only one who looks forward to it.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I'm sure not. I know I had it recorded at one point, but lost the device it was recorded on, unfortunately.

[ATG]

That sucks. I'm sorry to hear that. I was looking forward to hearing this in song form.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

If I can get a charger for my mp3, I might be able to do it. Or an iPod. I know how to format it all.

[ATG]

Well, than you officially know more about that stuff than I do. Let me know if you get it resolved please.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I will do so.

[Savior knowmore]

Very nice, Marie. I bet you wrote this from the "taken" heart, and it shows in your word choice and flow.

[Whiskurz]

A very well written piece.....Whisk