Breaking Point

A very personal song from my Mom's POV on a personal matter.

Sitting alone inside my head 
At night
You've been toying with my heart
Again
I'll hit you were it hurts
Out of spite
Should I stay or should I go?
Well that depends?

How long will I continue falling down?
If I stay by your side i'm sure that I will drown
So i'm booking a first class ticket out of this town
I swear that I won't go down to breaking point

Na na na na na na na nana
Na na na na na na na nanananaaa

Warm kisses, pretty lies, and your 
Empty Heart
There'll come a day that you'll pay for
What you've done
Where did I go wrong to make us
Fall Apart
Trust me this has only just begone 

How long will I continue falling down?
If I stay by your side i'm sure that I will drown
So i'm booking a first class ticket out of this town
I swear that I won't go down to breaking point

Mhh Mhh Mhh Mhh 
Mhh Mhh Mhh Mhh Mhh

Author's Note

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Reviews

[casablancavic]

I like it.

I can imagine a G N R type song with a nice Slash guitar solo or maybe Metallica or Bon Jovi

It's missing something that closes it off - it's close to great, but not quite at that point

Where would you put a solo and what instruments would you use?

Tell me more about how this would be a kick a*s tune - because to me, it has lots of potential