Walking In My Shoes

For one day, I want you to stand in my shoes

and experience the results from your actions that you chose.

For one day, I want you to see through my eyes

and fianlly see the thing you need to realize.

For one day, I want you to put me first

and experience the pain of a heart ready to burst.

For one day, all i want you to do is love me

and allow me to let this hurt be free.

Reviews

[MOON]

Lovely write , we all want to be seen to know we are valued.nwell penned.

[LetMeLoveYou]

I really like this poem :)
it shows how cruel our society is and how people are being judged before anyone gets to know them. It also shows how words can really hurt.
Very well done. :)

[Bobbie Coelho]

I like this poem very much. I really can't pick anything out, the poem starts with quiet power and builds up. It is short, which adds to the emotion. Brilliant poem.