Open Eyes

Something I put together a while back...now that I look at it, Im not entirely sure that im done with it.

Open eyes see truth.

They see lies.

They see deception.

Open eyes see reality.

But when reality becomes too harsh, you close them.

All it does is give fantasy.

A fantasy that goes away.

Reality is here and it doesn't go away.

Reviews

[Kitten]

Raw Brilliance. A couple revisions here and there would come across and translate better to the reader. I love the concepts you used, thanks for the update.