The way I make love to you

Loving you more with every word that leaves your lips

wanting more when our eyes meet

becoming unable to control my want for you

feeling the sexual tension, when my name excapes your lips

imagining the thing i'll do when im finally alone with you

and know you cant wait to

cause you love the way i make love to you

your addicted

and so am i

so thats why me and you should be

cause then when we make love

it wont just be pleasure between the two

it will be you loving me and me loving you.

 

 

My wish For J.R. and Me

Love you always and Forever

Inocence is only given once

and i gave it to you.

 

Reviews

[dark and twisty]

sweet but not in a cloying way. heartfelt more than anything else, a tad sensual too which is expected considering the topic your poem is centered on...nice work

[KUFU]

hehe...
Now I know of a fabled Wild Cherry! This succulent fruit is fabled to exist in a land few ever tread upon. I visited this land before and have dined on this delectable fruit! I yearn to return to this fabled land, but alas the secret is out and many-a-intrepid soul attempts to reach this land. Many crash and burn along the way causing baggage to be strewn about the paths to this Wild Cherry land. The paths are nearly un-navigable when this occurs.
I like this poem because one "ME" presumes that this Wild Cherry land has been visited by one J.R. and that "ME" willingly showed J.R. the secret path to this Wild Cherry...or either he found it himself, hmmm, this is cryptic...at any rate, "ME" presumes all innocence is lost.
An interesting Ode to defloration.