John keats, Haley M. Beloved Trinity

John Keats Verison

 

Give me women, wine, and snuff
Untill I cry out "hold, enough!"
You may do so sans objection
Till the day of resurrection:
For, bless my beard, they aye shall be
My beloved Trinity. - John Keats

 

My version

 

Give me whiskey, white and snuff

Until i cry out, Hold Enough!

You may do so sans objection

Till the day of resurrection,

for bless my heart these three shall be

my beloved trinity!