I Am in Love with the INVISIBLE MAN

I Am in Love with the INVISIBLE MAN,
even though I cannot see,
He transparent and no where around,
Is He even the one for me??

I fell deep for his persona,
He barely makes a sound,
He might be watching me this moment,
As I lay these words on down,

I think about him often,
He stays out of sight all the time,
He rather be left unnoticed, and
To me, I think that is fine.

He not very big on crowd pleasing,
He would rather be left on his own,
Is why he is known as, THE INVISIBLE MAN,
his versatility is certainly shown.

I Am not looking for no Loud man, or
a man thats totally wild, but
someone who is caring, and
concerning, fantastic, gentle and mild.

I am in Love with the INVISIBLE MAN,
People may find it VERY STRANGE, but
It my business and none of theirs,
I hope that he will never, ever change


B.R.
10/1/2025

Reviews

[Whisper]

Your poem feels like a secret whispered—loving someone unseen, unheard, yet deeply felt. The Invisible Man becomes both mystery and comfort. A touch more polish could make the imagery shine, but the heart within your words already glows.


Whisper

[Belle79]

Thank you 😊

[Chris Shaw]

A fun write Belle79. Your stanzas are lyrical and lively. You put a smile on my face wuth this post and I thank you for that. Have a good day.

Chris

[Belle79]

You're welcome