Train Flying Top Speed

Rickety, rick, rackety rack,
The train sings a song on its old track,
We swing with its tune,
Swaying and bouncing a moment too soon,
a dark and clear night, Moving like a typhoon,
we just saw a cow jump over the moon,
the train is moving, and not a minute is wasted
trying to make it on time hoping that we will make it
As the train goes it's produces melodies
singing along is my fondest memory
the ride was quick and we are all doing fine
Just thankful the train arrived right on time


B.R.
Date: 10/6/2025

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

A neat write about travelling by train and the joy that it provides......:)

I like the way it flows and the use of words that evoke images of the journey....

Thanks for sharing this poem....

Feel free to stop by and review one of my poems....

BB73

[Belle79]

Thanks, and will do 😊

[petec3638]

I can hear the varying tunes as it speeds along its way
Love it