The HOUSE with NO DOORS

The HOUSE with NO DOORS,
Is to a THOUGHT WITHOUT A VISION,
Like THINKING OF IDEAS, and
can't come to a FINAL DECISION,
Like DRIVING OUT OF CONTROL, and then getting into CRASH OR A COLLISON,
THE HOUSE with NO DOORS,
Is a FUTURE THAT IS UNSEEN
If you cannot get to it,
what does it really mean???
Keep striving and pushing
Don't let fear and doubt hold you down,
If it does:
DRIVE that BULLDOZER through that wall,
Flip them off, and see you around.
THE HOUSE with NO DOORS,
IS LIKE TO AN ENTRAPMENT,
LOCKED IN YOUR OWN DILEMMA,
JUST LOOKING FOR RELEASMENT,
If this PREDICAMENT HAPPENS to you,
GRAB STICKS OF DYNAMITE, and
BLOW YOUR WAY ON THROUGH.
If the HOUSE has no WINDOWS,
There is NO DREAM,
If the RAIN DOESN'T POUR,
there ain't NO STREAM.
If the SUN BEAMS DOWN,
you will feel the Burn,
You got to go through the Trials, and
From this you will learn,
Sometimes you will be put out
in an very uncomfortable state, but
it will lead you down to
things wonderful and great
So, please just remember this
This I do implore
find the way out of this trap of
THE HOUSE WITH NO DOORS!!!!


B.R.
Date: 10/6/2025

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

No one will save us. WE have to find our own way out of our head. And sometimes we can't seem to find that door and move on. WE get so scared, like an agoraphobic...feeling unsafe
if we think outside the box...but it is safer than we think if we can conquer our fears.
What a really thinking write.
Nicely done.
j.

[Belle79]

Thank you 😊

[RomaJ]

This poem really speaks to that feeling of being trapped in your own indecision or fear; like standing inside a house with no way out. I love how you turn that image into a call to action, to push through the walls of doubt and take control again. Bulldozing through obstacles --sometimes growth means breaking what confines us.

[DIVYA]

I found this an interesting poem and the subject is novel. I went to new places in my head while reading this. Great writing.

[Belle79]

Thanks you 😊

[Relic]

I interpret the house to be our minds. Something we must fight at times to break the spell of gloom. To break on through.

Nice one.

[Belle79]

Thank you 😊