Youthfull Minds

Just a short spur of the moment poem of becoming your own

It's a strange thing to behold, when such a youthful mind becomes her own

For my thoughts are now mine and mine alone.

It is such a gift that no loved one would betray

Mine such thoughts where no enemy could pierce its gates.

When my desires become my world, My heart is deaf to any other words.

Now it is too late for any influence to have its say,

For my souls wants are formed to stay.

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Growing up. A beautiful experience which you presented so well in this magnificent piece. Thank you for sharing

[William J. Marsh]

What a wonderful feeling is self discovery. Never let anyone take that away, you are awesome just the way you are.

[Scott Metro]

Finding it and moving forward to being a solid human being.
Great subject.
You told it well.

Scott