Chapter I

The alarm went off an hour before sundown, like usual. I was beginning to really dislike owning the club. I crawled out of bed and slowly started on my way towards the coffee pot. Halfway down the darkened stairway, I ran into Shakespeare.
His skin was the color of a pure starless, moonless night, slightly darker than the stairway we now stood in. I leaned into him, laying the feel of my lips against his, feeling his mouth spread into a smile, bringing one of my own. I locked my arms around his neck and pulled back enough to ask, "Are you ready for work?".
He kissed me again. Hard. Hard enough to bruise. It brought a small sound from my throat before I plastered myself to him. He ate at my lips as his hands caressed my body. He broke from the kiss and left me breathless on the stairs, his laughter trailing after him. Before he turned into out bedroom he called back down to me, " Oui, cheri, I am. But are you?" and he shut the door before I had time to think through his question.
I stood there a moment, relearning how to breath. A smile spread across my face and I headed down the stairs with nerves and excitement bubbling in my stomache. Tonight was opening night.

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

I stood there a moment, relearning how to breath. A smile spread across my face and I headed down the stairs with nerves and excitement bubbling in my stomache. Tonight was opening night.
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I stood there a moment, relearning how to breath. A smile spread across my face and I headed down the stairs with nerves and excitement bubbling in my stomach. Tonight was opening night.
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a little spelling error there...but things seem in order...its rather short...but what I can make of this is she is owner of a club, and Shakespeare is her boyfriend and they run the business together...not much else you can take from this narrative...

[Alexander Rodgers]

Good work, it flows well and has great description. The only suggestion I could give is too make it a little longer, it's more like an excerpt to me rather a full chapter, but nonetheless very good! I'm wondering what kind of club this is, and why Shakespeare is there lol.

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This is a good start! I am going to read more! I want to see what happens. There is just enough there to keep me interested.