Santa Claws

A quick poem I wrote in a semi-conscious state (brought about by tiredness) detailing my desire for the coming holiday season

Year in, year out I tried to celebrate All Hallows' Eve
Year in, year out I failed (can you believe?)
So, this year, I thought instead
To move the Holiday Season ahead
Ghoulish fantasies await your surprise...
As you witness two holidays' demise
Halloween and Christmas both joined as one
For a wee bit of festive fun!
So, without further adieu,
I present, here for you,
Ladies and Gentlemen, a round of applause
For the one, the only - Santa Claws

Author's Note

Not my best work, but I would certainly welcome any feedback. I think the first line is a bit disjointed in rhythm with the rest of the poem. Any help fixing that up would be appreciated. Constructive Critiques only please.

Reviews

This is somewhat reminiscent of 'Nightmare before Christmas.'
Very Tim Burton of you.
I enjoyed it very much, I do think the first line worked well in the piece. So I wouldn't worry too much about it. :)
~Bree