Like the Stars

We humans are all like stars in our unique way.

Like the stars

you don't know

who you are.

Shining bright

hoping someone will 

see the light.

Like the stars 

you wonder from afar.

Like the stars

you are what you are.

Just like the stars.

Just like the stars

Shining bright

you hope it will

always be night.

Then your light

can shine bright

over the sky.

You ask yourself why

the world is as it is.

Like the satrs

you wonder who you are.

Just like the stars

you ponder everything.

You question anything.

Just like the stars

you gaurd the Heavens above.

You watch over

the universe below.

Just like the stars

you are what you are;

the stars but,

unklike the stars,

you have struggles.

You struggle to understand

what makes the land

the way it is.

Unlike the stars

you struggle to understand

why man

has trouble to comprehend.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling problems

Reviews

[Windy]

I like the idea behind the poem and you are correct, we are all like stars, different, unique in our own way. I really like the beginning but then I'm afraid I got "lost" again. I think it may just be me, maybe the repetitiveness throughs me off. I'm not really sure. Maybe I'll get the hang of it! Sorry not much of a review and I'm sure no help of any sort. But you keep writing and I'll keep reading! ;)

[DevilsNeedLove2]

If more people understood this about themselves, we wouldn't be living in such a sewer. I wish more people thought like you do.

Besides grammar and spelling, (which you say to ignore) I don't have any suggestions other than keep at it. You have great ideas to share.