The sounds of space

Love is not bound by physical laws
Gravity cannot trap it in it's pull
Love is like a spectrum of light revealing our flaws
Our love cannot be used to fill
This container called me

Be, I cannot Be
with or without you

Even in the noiseless depths of space
You can hear the clawing
of the words I love You
try to escape his throat
to the ears of the one
who won't hear them

Reviews

[lostnstars]

I'm in love with this poem. I love the last stanza a lot, for me it shows how much you love the person, you even metaphor it to the noiseless depths of space, which is quite clever.
Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)