Desk

Another random poem. :)

This desk in front of me...

What secrets does it hold?

Does it hold books?

Or maybe hidden words?

Maybe an old wound,

Long forgotten in the many years of it's life.

Could it hold lies and deceit?

What could this old desk hold?

Maybe a child's haunts,

Or joys, with it's many drawers.

What secrets does this old desk hold?

Author's Note

Advice please.

Reviews

[Mandi]

I like how you asked questions. it gives the reader something to think about. However i think you could think of a better title. and maybe a little more of 'what the desk CoUlD hold'...
good work ben!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A poem to set us thinking!

[BABSIE BEE]

Very good. I wrote a poem Pillow, which is similar regarding secrets etc. Well written and thought out. Thanks for sharing.
BBXX

[Seracies]

I liked the whole idea of it, wondering about what might have been, knowing that the desk had a past even if no one was aware of it. It was something different and I enjoyed reading it.