Day one

It's like the title says day one of my problem in life. I never graduated or ever took a writing class so if it's bad just go light on me

Cuts on my arms to hide the pain from my soul, The lies in my eyes make my nose snow cold, I cant breathe anymore says the love still inside, The devil has a smile while God gives me one last try, I promise to do better is what i said a thousand times,

I promise it will be different I say, I promise to break away, I promise my love for you is real, But in reality the only love I know, is a line so thick so white, a straw so thin, about two inches in height, my heart races before it's even inside me, my eyes glow when it's gone, and I see the devil sitting right beside me

This isn't a sad story, it's real life, it's hard times, it's my life, my one life, so go judge me its fine, I don't deserve to be heard by God anymore, I'm a waste of his precious time, he listens anyways, he knows this is the real last time

Author's Note

So it's my first poem I've ever shared with anyone. I'm looking at doing this as a therapy method and I hope it works

Reviews

[Morgan Bland]

This is an incredibly powerful piece. Excellent work! None of us truly "deserve" to be heard by God. That's the beauty of it. No matter what. Always there. Lover of all: Sinners of all kinds. For that label which is often only applied to the "worst" applies to us all.
It's good you're trying writing. It can be an immense benefit simply to be heard.

[BERTO]

Thank you so much for reading I'm happy you liked my poem. The reason for me writing is not to get any type of sympathy but for people to hear my words the way I cant express in my every day life. I'm glad you understand that. I hope to post many more soon so please stay tune

[Morgan Bland]

Absolutely. I look forward to reading them.

[A.G.]

Damn. Very powerful write. I admire your honesty and strength throughout the poem. I understand this poem on a personal level and to be honest, we only have ourselves in this world. Keep writing my friend☺️ it's awesome.
-Angelina

[BERTO]

Thank you so much. I really enjoy reading your writing and felt I can also relate to them as well. I look forward to reading the rest of them when I have the time

[A.G.]

Thank you and your welcome. I look forward to your writing as well Berto.😊

[sette]

and i really hope you stay strong and face the adversities in life

[BERTO]

Thank you and I believe this time I will