Elements

It was something that I just made for fun, some random thoughts. Someone suggested that I should finish it, and thus here it is.

Flame,

Kindles my heart,

Like an ember in dying light.

 

Wind,

Blows my soul,

Taking me to places I've never seen.

 

Earth,

Holds me down,

A mortal curse.

 

Water,

Washes my sadness,

Dousing the Fire.

 

Dream,

An Illusion

Of what wasn't there.

Reviews

[Rochelle Delaine]

Thank goodness for water, it replenishes you and can help you last longer. I might argue whether or not longevity is found in it.

[Penny for your thoughts]

Beautiful depth. So much emotion in a few words!