MAGNETIC TRANCE
A Poem by
Betty Hermelee
how to de-stress
stress is red, blood chaos, thick clusters
I shall paint my core in yellow washes
to savor warm vibrations
from sun's magnetic trance
© 2022 Betty Hermelee
Reviews
Yellow for warmth for the feel good factor, feeling better already. Red for stress. Too fiery for me. I'm all for the sun's magnetic trance Betty.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I can understand why Chris, but life is not all warmth even though we want it to be; thanks for your.. read more I can understand why Chris, but life is not all warmth even though we want it to be; thanks for your understanding review. Hope all is well.
Best
B.
3 Years Ago
All good Betty. Hope the same for you. Take care my friend :)
3 Years Ago
You as well,and you're very welcome
Betty, this was simply awesome! I could feel the warm sun as it slowly led me to relaxation!
Posted 3 Years Ago
Betty, this was simply awesome! I could feel the warm sun as it slowly led me to relaxation!
3 Years Ago
Thank you so much Kathy, much appreciated!
Best
B.
3 Years Ago
You are welcome!
Brilliant writing! Visual vibrations in yellow rippling all the way here to me! Where do you come up with these?!
Posted 3 Years Ago
Brilliant writing! Visual vibrations in yellow rippling all the way here to me! Where do you come up with these?!
3 Years Ago
Don't ask me!!! just pops out of the pea brain...
Thank you my dear P
Hugs, B
3 Years Ago
you're welcome and not a pea brain! You are brilliant!
a trance this poem puts me under...stress, chaos,washed away in warm streams
of understanding.
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
a trance this poem puts me under...stress, chaos,washed away in warm streams
of understanding.
j.
3 Years Ago
Thanks so much for your lovely review J.
Best
B.
My brain cells just coagulated in the color of your chaos!
Posted 3 Years Ago
My brain cells just coagulated in the color of your chaos!
3 Years Ago
Thanks W., appreciate it!
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Added on April 25, 2022
Last Updated on April 25, 2022
Author
Betty Hermelee Black Mountain, NC
About
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid ..
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