INVITATION

sometimes the cosmos knows when one is in need

INVITATION

In a dark vein

I stroll along the beach

Near the bubbles at sea’s edge

Water lucid and calm as a lake

Placid night, save for a seagull’s flap

To ease my humor

Clouds luminous by the moon’s blush

 

I sit in yoga posture

Spread the textured sand

amidst my fingers

My neck stretches high

I shall purify my mind

Of sad notions

 

Surprisingly I sense pulses of fiery heat

Upon my shoulders and to the rear

Fear it may be a beast

I gaze up to see the moon

Burst from the clouds

Perhaps an invitation to me

To shroud me in his warmth

Engross me in his mirth

Declaim my sulk

I unfold my appreciation

He vanishes

The shimmering stars concur

 

 

 

Author's Note

My photograph from Amelia Island; thank you for reading

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Vivid imagery in this one. It almost places you at the scene. The part where the moon bursts from the clouds very effectively conveys the cessation of a mood of sadness.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks for a great review John
Best, B

[Kelly Scheppers]

Totally mesmeric, Betty. The beach offers us serenity and solace, all that emanates from the presentation of your words. Great photography, too. Loved it!

[Betty Hermelee]

A wonderful review Kelly, very spot on...
Best, B

[Ken e Bujold]

the opening two lines of this gem will sit with me for a long spell I think. Great metaphor that opens the mind to so many wonderful possibilities of thoughts. The rest of the poem was a fabulous stroll along.
"purify my mind of sad notions" another killer image.

love my visit as always friend

ken

[Betty Hermelee]

A stunning review Ken; much appreciated!
Best, B

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write, stunning imagery Betty.

[Pete]

such a cool, clever and telling poem. speaks from the heart to the heart. terrific wording, flow and imagery. very revealing. i love it ...

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Pete, what a stunning review!!!
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

You stir the senses with this write Betty. Sight, sound, taste and touch. The description is to die for. You took me there. Beautiful and memorable poetry. Love this poem.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Chris dear, a heartfelt review indeed and so sorry for the delay!
Hope you're well
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

All good Betty. Thank you 💐

[Weeping willow]

Such a beautiful write as the images flowed through my head, reading each line to the fullest ;-} loved it.

[Betty Hermelee]

What a beautiful review W. W., much appreciated.
Best, B

[W. Barrett Munn]

Sounds like a quite placid and peaceful nighttime experience.

Winston

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Winston, much appreciated and sorry for the delay!
Best, B

[willweb]

The moon has a way of soothing many things that may bother us. It's soft light on a vacuous evening fills the void with warmth and feeling, allows us to breathe and not feel so alone while doing so. I loved this Betty, so very calming and comforting.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you for a lovely review Will, much appreciated!
Best, B

[Lorry]

Sometimes the cosmos knows when one is in need and sometimes it likes to be a tease, but on such a lovely setting as a beach, with waves gently lapping, the possibility of its jackpot paying out can seduce even an innocent.... So I'm told 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Lorry for your always great review
Best, B