INDULGENCE

a bit tipsy....

INDULGENCE

 

With all these agitating thoughts running through my mind

I believe it is time for me to frequent a café nearby

T’s 5 0’clock and I am more than eager to leave my abode

Across the street and one more block there is a lovely café

That I have noticed

Candles atop white cloths and dim lighting

Anything too luminous shall  disturb my eyes

I prefer not to be conspicuous, therefore  my leggings

And a baggy sweater is splendid, disguise my ugly body

 

After a chilly walk I enter the café

A short, thin Asian woman greets me and directs me to a cozy table in the corner, ideal and inconspicuous

I order a glass of Chardonnay wine and start to

Survey the patrons

Mainly young couples, yet there appears to be

An elderly man with a French cap smoking a pipe

He cannot genuinely see me as he appears to sit sideways

From where I am located

 

What I can view is a young couple leaning in

Faces nearly touch, hands clasp together

Seemingly infatuated

It generates a smile on my face

And stirs me to reflect on my own infatuation

With my soldier with a bit of heartache  as well

At once, my head senses the wine is engaged

I giggle at the young couple, sensing no sadness now

I ponder about ordering one more glass

The waitress carries it on a small tray

I indulge, my cheeks are flush

I am afraid I resemble a clown

Oh dear, I anticipate some tipsy walking

On my return to the hotel

I pay the bill and gingerly arise from my chair

I take my time and amble to my abode

Christine greets me at the front door and assists me upstairs

 

At once, I am delighted to see my bed

I shall not hesitate to fall asleep swiftly tonight

And I must awaken early for my appointment tomorrow to see the doctor at 8:00AM

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my series

Reviews

[DIVYA]

A chapter I had missed but am so glad I could read today.

She is alone but it feels good to read she's enjoying her own company. So much so that the youtful couple and their romance does not evoke any pangs in her. She's just enjoying her drinks and taking in the lovely ambience of the place. I relate to this so much, being a solo traveller often.

And I loved this chapter!

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Divya'
I can't thank you enough for being such a wonderful supporter of my next book... your reviews of each chapter are so important to me and and I value them immensely...
Warmly, B

[DIVYA]

Its such a joy to know my reviews are helpful. Especially when your book is so engrossing. Keep sharing, dear Betty. 💐💕

[petec3638]

I like the Caff with the dim lights. don't spy on the young couple > we were both young one day > don't remember much >
Tottering home - thinking -can make it/ too much falling over medicine
Ahhhhhhh BED

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Peter for a lovely review
Warmly, B

[petec3638]

your welcome

[John the Baptist]

Our heroine seeks to divert herself with an outing to a nearby cafe. She notices various other diners and orders chardonnay. A young couple reminds her of herself and her wounded soldier. Another chardonnay's effects make her realize she has overindulged and she returns to her hotel, where she has to be helped upstairs. Her situation is having its effects.

[Betty Hermelee]

yes indeed John! thank you sincerely for your support, much appreciated
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Betty...

This is such a great, human write of an experience most of us can relate to ....I certainly can..:)

The almost guilty feelings of slipping into a local bar to sample its wares and observe its patrons and what they get up to...

The words flow well and the line that makes you refect about the soldier is interesting...
and then the ending which is gratitude for being home and being able to sleep well...

thanks for sharing this insight into your experience of life....

BB73

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!🌷
Warmly, B

[Sami Khalil]

Little indulgence, some observed romance, contemplating life and work, resting for an appointment; you are a true story talker and teller; you pack lots of detail and meanings in short sentences.
Wow!

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you, much appreciated!
Warmly
B🌷🌷🌷

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome and appreciated.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Cliffhanger once more. But really, should you be drinking?

[Betty Hermelee]

well, in those days they smoked and drank, even pregnant……thank you WB for your lovely review!read morewell, in those days they smoked and drank, even pregnant……thank you WB for your lovely review!
Warmly,
B.🌷

[emmajoygreen]

It's such a joy to re.read your words, to re-discover such a tale and of course, knowing this time, the fine research you did to hug your novel and make it reality rather than mere letters. Grand words, Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Em...you are the best!!!
Hugs, B

[emmajoygreen]

Oh I do love to be spoiled!!! Truly hope your day has been a goody and you're full of smiles, peace and contentment. A few welcome frissons (my word of the slowly passing day!) :)

[Betty Hermelee]

smiles back at you dear friend🌷🌷🌷🌷😊😊😊😊😊😊

[emmajoygreen]

Thank you, dear and truly valued friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Betty. We do need to have some fun sometimes. I prefer a beer and whiskey shot. I enjoyed the tale. In my young days. I like to watch people. Now I seek quiet and my garden. Good morning from Michigan. I hope you are enjoying the days of Spring.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you John for a fine review; I prefer white wine!!!
Warmly, B

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Betty and you are welcome my friend. I hope you are enjoying the days of Spring.

[Betty Hermelee]

i am thank you dear John….😊

[Soren]

In hours of relaxation when the mind is free to drift we often see ourselves in what is around us as the couple in love when one misses it. A beautiful portrayal of letting go. Nicely imaged and structured with great flow.

[Betty Hermelee]

A great review Soren...you always find what's beneath...and in her mind, I appreciate you!
Warmly, B

[Lorry]

Don't we all need that little bit of indulgence to make our "normality" a bit more bearable?
Sometimes we just need that normalcy of people getting on with their everyday to feel less we are the only ones and more of were in it together. Or maybe you were just going stir crazy looking at the same walls! 😃

[Betty Hermelee]

WE all need some indulgence!!! Thank Lorry for your lovely review, much appreciated!
Warmly, B