You know I love your stories and I haven't had the chance to read them for a while and now I can't find them! While I was looking for it I found this poem and aha it's very important to know why you write before reading the story from the beginning! and it gave me the answers I needed, it's really beautiful and I can imagine you like this... I also loved your photo! Please keep writing like this!
PS: if you can tell me the second book's first poem's name I'd be very happy!
Take care!
Posted 5 Months Ago
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5 Months Ago
Dear Beren
thank you for reading this poem…. i appreciate your reviews…. my first poetic .. read moreDear Beren
thank you for reading this poem…. i appreciate your reviews…. my first poetic prose novel is “At Bridge’s End”…. the one i am putting up,on the Cafe by episode is the sequel to the first book…has no name yet!
thank you for your excellent reviews🌷🌷🌷🌷
Warmly, B
B.,I wish I could develop a system as efficient as yours. When I turn in I place my notepad beside my bed, in hopes something will come to me from dreamland, in the way of Robert Louis Stevenson. Unfortunately, my dreams seem to be fugitives from mental hospitals, making no sense at all, and in the first minutes after awakening I feel like a dud resurrection, hoping that coffee will save me. I usually get my inspirations in the daylight hours, when I least expect them.
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
thank you my friend, really nice review…i guess everyone has their clock for writing.. ideas could.. read morethank you my friend, really nice review…i guess everyone has their clock for writing.. ideas could pop in anytime!🌷🌷🌷🌷
Warmly, B
Betty,
You too? Everything I write comes from a soup of memories, dreams, people and stuff from who k where?` are you okay... haven't seen you for a little while...
Vol
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
thank you dear Vol, first a dear old friend passed away…then another friend just broke her neck on.. read morethank you dear Vol, first a dear old friend passed away…then another friend just broke her neck on a fall, so i’ve been helping her and her daughter…. just pre- occupied, but am still writing when i get a moment ( like now at 1:00 AM! 🌷🌷🌷
Betty,
WELCOME HOME! I spent months taking care of my mom last year... leave next week for N.. read moreBetty,
WELCOME HOME! I spent months taking care of my mom last year... leave next week for North Carolina to begin again... so I know what it is to give your time and energy for the benefit of those we love...
Vol
You are wiser than I am. When I'm in bed and get an inspired idea, whether from a dream or just thinking, I say to myself, "I gotta write this down as soon as I get up in the morning!" You know what happens next. Yeah, I get up and think, "Now what was that great idea I had last night? Maybe I'll remember it later...."
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
thank you dear Sam, got to write it down when it hits you…or else, a sweet review🌷🌷🌷🌷.. read morethank you dear Sam, got to write it down when it hits you…or else, a sweet review🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
Warmly, B
And yes, what a very good impression of Emma joy you do! 😃
Tucked up against the backdrop of moonlit clouds and her propensity never switching off, even when time tells her it's sleep o'clock, as she tries to fit one or fourteen other things in to her day!
Oh, it wasn't an impersonation and you too suffer from brainnotswitchoffitis?
I'm very sorry to hear that and may I offer you my sympathies. I don't suffer the same terrible fate, but rather it's polar opposite, briandontswitchonitis!
😃
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
gad you can do that dear Lorry….
your typical clever review….how do yo think up those nam.. read moregad you can do that dear Lorry….
your typical clever review….how do yo think up those names? thank you muchly!🌷🌷🌷
Warmly, B
Good evening Betty. I was the victim of a sealed adoption and know nothing of my birth parents nor the possibility of siblings. Upon carefully reading your poem three times I felt I had found a sister. You have so accurately described many of my nights, awake in the wee hours, headphones on with carefully chosen favorites from Spotify, taking the seemingly random words and inspired phrases I have collected in my mind over hours or even days, and arranging them to coalesce into a poem I feel I may share. I hope for sleep; if lucky I fall into sleep, head hanging over my writing. Thank you for your beautiful poem that makes me feel less alone in those sleepless hours of the night. MSB
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
Dear Michael
so happy this poem had a positive effect n you….thank you for your very honest.. read moreDear Michael
so happy this poem had a positive effect n you….thank you for your very honest and fine review
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷
7 Months Ago
i can be your adopted older sister! i guess we process alike! anyway, thank you for a very honest an.. read morei can be your adopted older sister! i guess we process alike! anyway, thank you for a very honest and generous review🌷🌷🌷🌷
Warmly, B
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..