This is a poem displaying full acceptance of love and its different footsteps - they that set out the rules for the entirity of the music. Love surely endures time whereas presumptous passion can fade into a safe and contented place, full of memories to call upon when moments arrive to tickle the senses - as should be!
A superb and beautiful finish - not to your love, but your poem,
' We are like birds who leave the nest
And fly to another venue
A place of warmth and tender memories'
NB: not apart but still together. Kudos absolute.
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Always a beautiful, understating review dear Em...
I appreciate YOU endlessly!!!
BIG S.. read moreAlways a beautiful, understating review dear Em...
I appreciate YOU endlessly!!!
BIG SMILES! xo
B
So true it is that although love may be blind in some ways it is marriage that makes us blind in others. A wonderful and most truthful write. Nicely done
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Thank you Soren, as usual a beautiful review!!!
Much appreciated!
Warmly, B
Thank you so much, dear Betty for posting this wonderful poem full of such deep and meaningful reflections.
Ecclesiastes 3, The Holy Bible says:
"To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven"
Every phase in life is passing and youth is fleeting too. Its joys are like ephemeral sea waves, the brief blooming of a rose, the passing of a heady season. Yet, where we are going is also not without its wonders. Its a place of untold warmth, undying bonds, eternal togetherness and gratitude in shared memoriies.
Ageing is a priviledge not all are given. Those of us who'll have it are so truly blessed! Especially with a loyal, loving, long time companion beside us.
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Thank you dear Divya...makes me feel warm... and I believe your wise words... I appreciate you! Than.. read moreThank you dear Divya...makes me feel warm... and I believe your wise words... I appreciate you! Thank you from my heart xoxo
Warmly, B
My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..