Chance

Brings tears to my eyes.

Something was special in those pretty blue eyes of yours.  They took you away, took you from my grip.  They ripped you from me, like a band aid ripped off a raw scar on my heart. Are they treating you right? Life is cruel, to do this to me; to do this to us. You deserved to stay here, now you have no chance. What if they turn you into them? A cheat, a liar, even a heart breaker. Nobody understands; this terrible pain I feel inside. Without you, it’s like something is missing. That’s right, you are. I can never hold you in my lap again. I can never just sit there and watch your favorite cartoon with you. Sneak you candy, even when your mom said no. Or even spoil you.  Oh God, I miss you. If I could just have you back; have you here in my arms. To hear you scream my name and hug me when I get home from school. This isn’t fair. I deserve to be in your life too. This isn’t fair, I don’t understand. I don’t understand this at all. I love you. Why take you away from me? They are probably putting you in dangerous situations, probably not even taking care of you. Are you doing okay? I miss you. I miss you. Come back, come back to me. Don’t turn into them, I know that’s all you have to teach you, but don’t be like them. Cheat us, hurt us, and lie to us. You’re going to forget me, or think I’m a horrible person. Just because of her, because she’s terrible. She hates us; she only wants us when we have something to give. So she uses you as a pawn, and takes you away.  I miss you. I miss you.

Oh dear, I miss you.

Dedicated to my only lovely nephew. 

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Author's Note

I can't stop the tears right now that are coming..

xoxo
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Reviews

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ahhhhh, what a great piece.........iliked + loved it.......well written.......nothing to say...but pretty i wanna say something ..plz...don't get feel my words.......i wanna say....you've got a talent to write ..honestly saying.......but girl.....if you do write a poem, then write it in stanza's...or phrases........then it'sll b good/nice to read........don't writen in phragraps....it shows .....llike u are wriitn a story..........

soorry, to hurt you............i was just givin a suggestion........hope you'll do what i said...........anyway.....your all overrating is 89.09/100......well written,...think about my words........sorry if m y words hurt you......

[Beverly Jane]

Not upset or angry at all, thanks for the nice comment. I get what you're saying. I usually do write it in stanzas or such, but this one was different/special for me. I'll remember the things you say for next time. Thanks for the review. :)