Blue Eyes, Black Tears

 

 When sorrows inhales my senses
And wrath leaps forth
Black tears exhales
From the eyes of mine
My soul covered in remorse
Reflecting in the sight through the eye
The open door to the soul
The eye, the hurt inside reveals
Vindictive words, a sharpened blade
Destructive, destined to redeem
And every disappointment, every vice
Vacant,degraded,crushed
Condemned and cursed
To immortal darkness dwell
As for lacerate wisdom of the ages a story to pass
Onto those who rejoice in others pain

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Dark and full of sorrow, feeding on the pain a misery of others.

Creatively written.

Thanks for entering my contest and good luck to you.

[Raven Malak]

Blocking ones pain by enjoying others pain. I once was like that, But after opening myself i felt so much better.

Good work this one got me.

Raven Malak