Had Something

Having personal experiences helps with my writing. I found that out the hard way.

                     I used to have something that I could call mine.
                             
                     I would treat it like a queen, in my own mind.
                                    
                        Where it went, it went far far away.
                                   
                        If it's ment to be, I'll see it one day

                      That's what they say, thats what I'm told.

                   These emotions can't stay, they can not be controlled.

                     If I could go back before I entered this painful maze.

                    I would give my life to convince her to stay.

 

         By:  Adam Ridge

Author's Note

I'm kinda iffy about a few punctuation errors. Feel free to help me out.

Reviews

[Constance]

You know, grammar and punctuation have little to do with talent in writing, because all in all, writing is about expression, art, sharing, communicating. It's just nice and lucky when your grammar allows you to communicate a bit clearer.
I loved this. You will see it one day. I have faith in that. Well done, and so glad you entered this in my contest. Thank you very much.

[WhoaitSarah]

very good!

[Dave Lounsbury]

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